You are….

Many Many Thanks to Shilpi Joshi ( Didi ) Amazing Tibet

You are….

Just as  amazing  as the above picture….

You come up with surprises…..

You come up with love….

You bring love when the clouds above fall…

You come and mix up with me….

Like water falling in the river….

As if we were never unknown…to each other….

You come up with dreams …….

With zest to turn it into reality….

You come up with feelings…..

So true that…you make me cry always…

You surprise me always….

Heal away my pain….

You make me feel shy….

I am sorry every time I close my eyes…

You give me strength….

Saying that “we will conquer the world”

Together….

Like the river….above…

Making its way to ocean…

You say we will make our way…together…

Who says….the banks of river never meet…

Whats there in not noticing the BRIDGE ……

Connecting the banks of river ….to make them meet….

You are…..

Just as  amazing  as the above picture….

Like the clouds…..always there for me….

Like the water  in the river….

Never going to dry….

Your love is something….that is ever mine….

You are…..just as amazing as the above picture….

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10 Responses

  1. Lucky pic of mine that it could bring analogies to ur feelings!! Loved the poem..as usual.. 🙂

  2. “Whats there in not noticing the BRIDGE ……
    Connecting the banks of river ….to make them meet….”

    Best lines!!

  3. The persona is in love, it’s nt a stresful socalld love tht has pains & tragic feelins, thtz nt an ordinary love either-therez truimph,yearn 2 unite the contrasts like the ‘BRIDGE as a Bond between the banks of a River’- a huge round of applaud to the poet & HEARTFELT SALUTE 2 THE PERSONA 4 her/his TrusT towards the Beloved!

  4. u know what….don’t let only us read ur creations…let the whole world see it…

  5. You are…..

    Just as amazing as the above picture….

    Like the clouds…..always there for me….

    Like the water in the river….

    Never going to dry…

  6. Lovely poem Shweta! Very refreshing! Enjoyed it.

  7. You come up with feelings…
    So true that….you make me cry always….

    Your love is something….that is ever mine…
    You are…just as amazing as the above picture….
    ….
    Lovely lines… 🙂
    n lovely pic…my both thumbs up… 🙂

  8. You are…..just as amazing as the above picture….

    I think i would like saying this to u as well!!!

    The poem……well no words to say!!! just hats off!!

  9. great words….. मलाई मञ्जुलको एउटा कविताको याद आयो, ठ्याक्कै त नमिल्ला तर कविता यस्तो छ……………..

    “यो पुल पनि कति अचम्मको हुन्छ,

    दुई किनारलाई जोडिदिन्छ ..

    ए ! तिमी र मबीच पनि एउटा सानो पुल हालौँ न…………..
    ……………
    …………….
    सुटुक्क ।। ”

    nice….. kip writing

  10. Rajan kathet jee,
    Can you write the whole poem by manjul please.Please can u link me to that poem(if published somewhere) so i can go through once coz i like it so much.
    Sweta didi,
    Your creation is so good.It is amazing and you know,
    “Whats there in not noticing the BRIDGE ……
    Connecting the banks of river ….to make them meet…….

    I like this lines much much much.It is mind blowing.The best creation of yours.I appreciate.
    prakash
    CA

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