Sweet Cigarette

Lighted me up

Like a sweet cigarette

Saw me burning till the last moment….

Love….as the sweetest cigarette…

Felt like ….a full moon….

In the darkest night…

Lately, I realized….

I was falling from the greatest height….

The cigarette….turned into ashes…

I turned into ashes…

Kept on seeing…..

Stepping on it….

Attached to me…..

Like a tumor affecting my body…

Creating Cellular turmoil….

Love as the loveliest tumor…

Like the cactus in the desert…

With hopes and thrones…

Piercing heart….every time

With a touch…

Lighted me up

Like a sweet cigarette

Saw me burning alive till the last moment….

Love….as the sweetest cigarette…

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13 Responses

  1. khoi ke vanu..i’ve got no words to describe…wat deep feelings..wat deep thoughts..wat analogies…speechless..as always…

  2. wao wat a sweet poem like a sweeeeeet cigarette :))) ”Like a tumor affecting my body…Creating Cellular turmoil” ;Loved these lines acting as anatomical backbone for ur muscular lines and physiological units of ur feelings……grrreat :)))

  3. sorry i gave up!! hard to comment on poems u know. Don like overshadowing these wonderful sentiments!!

  4. i gave up!! u know its hard to comment on poems. just don’t like killing this overwhelming sentiment!!

  5. great poem !! but are cigerattes sweeter actually ?

  6. Sweet Cigarette… Silent satire…liked it very much dear… 😉

  7. as usual…no comments…

  8. अंग्रेजी कविता बुझ्ने हुती त्यति छैन आफ्नो, तर मन प-यो:)

  9. Getting addicted to ur posts… Deep feelings n wonderful expression..keep them comin’ my Sweet friend 🙂

  10. Very interesting and amusing subject. I read with great pleasure.

  11. Thanking you all

    Sweta 🙂

  12. Phat article, amazing looking website, added it to my favorites.

  13. A good poem-the speaker’s analogy of love with sth sweet & da dreadful consequences…fantastic Great Fall and Maximum insecurity of the persona in the LOVE has been articulatedly presented… Hwever, I’m afraid, I doubt on persona’s pessimism-IS LOVE ALWAYS PAINFUL-the thorn like spines of cactus is a significant adaptional feature tht suports cactus lesen transpiration rate & survive in tht extensive heat-so optimism cud b drawn instead of summrizin the persona’s love as ashes…

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