Rolling salts..

I feel your absence….

As salts roll….down my cheeks…

I feel your presence….

In the heat of this saltiness….

Flows away my kohl….

I wipe the out….

You flow away with it….

I wipe you out….

Again and Again….

Salt rolls…round my cheeks….

However hard I try…

To wipe…it out…

First it wets my cheek…

Reminds me the presence….

Reminds me the absence…

Ufff…these rolling salts…

Preserves you….till date….

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8 Responses

  1. Nice.. If I would have to say the same thing, I’d have said, “I cried, remembering you”, only poetic mind can think the same thing this way..
    Keep it up.. 🙂

  2. Nice poem…ali dherai salty laagyo….hehe.. 😉

  3. Salt rolls…round your cheeks….
    ahem… garna ta milena…..

    I felt in these lines your sensitive poet about human nature.
    I felt here your effective presence.

    rolling salts… really poetic glance !

  4. आँशुकवि !

  5. Nice poem, tara ali sano bhayena feeling sabai express nagare jasto lagyo!

  6. wow
    what to comment? keep writing. try to change your blog into your site. you are loosing what you deserve.
    good luck.

  7. salt rolls down the cheek……….. heating you…… cooling you………..disappears……….. the next comes rolling……… same fate …………………. after it stops……………… back to the normal

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