Emptiness….

I lack….it

You lack ….it

We lack ….it

Where do we find it….then…

Why are we searching it …then…

Because we want it…..

Why….why ….why….

We want it desperately…

I want it desperately….

At the end….

I am left…

Empty handed….

You are left

Empty handed….

We are left

Empty handed…..

P.S. Emptiness

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7 Responses

  1. nice poem…bt empty chain hudaina hai….lol.. 😉

  2. So simple poem Sweta. Ohh… I am thinking that i have to come with You to attend tuition class. I wanna learn to write simple writing.

    Don’t feel emptiness. Your thinking n writing is fuel to charge we reader’s mind n Soul.

  3. Nice start and so is the ending… loved it.. 🙂

  4. some time we have to accept the emptiness also. we cant get all the thing we want.

  5. what is making u to feel emptyness ??? We, the readers, are here …Swetbanu ….with u ….n always….

  6. nice expression……………. you love pessimism then…

  7. we want it … but don’t get it. Why is that? Don’t we get what we want? But why are we wanting emptiness? Are we full already? Isn’t there anything remaining to fill us?

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