Drops !!!

One and two…

A hundreds of you….

A thousands of you….

Where is your silver lining ?

White Clouds…

And why are you falling……

One and two

A hundred and thousands of you….

Falling from the sky

Wetting everything…..

A drop and two…

Again a hundreds and thousands of you…

Let me feel you…

Let me chill my bones…

Let me love you…

Dear lovely drops…

Let me love you…

Dear lovely drops…

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14 Responses

  1. Lovely… Rhythmic like the rain itself… but here the wind is blowing away the tiny rain drops.. it’s scary… 🙂

  2. here the wind is blowing the cold rain into our skins … ‘let me chill my bones, let let me love you’ … what a challenge to appreciate the beauty of it.

  3. May the ‘lovely drops’ continue to bring sparkle of poetry – for all to enjoy 🙂

    A delightful poem.

  4. nice poem…and loving those drops… 😉

  5. How did u count the drops yar ??? u r too genious ….he he

  6. शितको थोपा बनी म पनि पो झरी दिउँकी !
    एउटा एउटा गरिकन आफुलाई छरी दिउँकी !!

  7. Good flow of words and perfect repetition of phrases made this poem so realistic. Felt like those drops are falling on me. 🙂

  8. Nice to read…

  9. keep it up Sweta

  10. haha this one is my fav now 🙂 i think u can write on anything u see…….

    one and two….
    few frends like u… 😛

  11. Lovely poem Sweta… wow… I so wish it rained again so that I could wet myself in the hundreds and thousands of drops!

  12. wow grea8 poem. me too feel like i was wet in the monsooon rain. Long time i could not see rain. away from Nepal and the place i live rains in a while. sometimes in years. i miss that clouds that was passing through the hills and making many different artistic shapes of my imagination while i was child or teenage. wow i miss them all for long now. let them fall till we get wet. here is the wordpress site i am currently working on at http://www.net2nepal.com
    enjoy!!

  13. Thank you so much for appreciating this poem…I hope to write more poems…..just it must rain….ahem !!!

  14. enigmantic!!!!

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