Void ——- You created
Mystries and all….
Lost ……………….
And to be never found…..
Like a wonderful pearl…..
Deep !! so much Deep….
Like in the ocean Blue…
The void has created hole….
For you it is easy…..
For me….I suffer it alone…
Hard….
It makes me suffocate….
It makes me cry so loud….
You turn your deaf ear….
A space to be fulfilled by you….
Because it is created by you…..
You left it as you never knew….
You say “I am frustrated too”
I don’t believe….you have a void too…
You occupy everything….
You occupy the Void too….
Mind, soul, heart, WORLD…
And the VOID too…….
Filed under: Poetry | Tagged: absurd, Mind, soul, suffocation, Void
Absurd poem with a great meaning…Void will be full-filled, if we think it in positive way…it’s only a hole not a black hole, in black hole everything will vanish… but this is only a hole, only a void…this poem is reminding my physics classes, where we have studied about hole and electron under semiconductor, chapter…hehehe….love this poem as usual…
Beautiful expression! Loved it!
difficult to comment….deep feelings potrayed with combination of simple words..love it..as usual
you got such a wonderful feelings and expression even being in void .. i havent found just emptyness here but feelings all around which always inspire you to be more creative always but it would be really better if you add some +thoughts also
Nice Poem !!! Liked it !
Thank you! You often write very interesting articles. You improved my mood.
Whoever be lost , ll come back soon………
Simple words yet soulfully expressive…luv the way u write….
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Thanking you all !!!!
Sweta
really an awesome poem, love ur writing..keep it up